Edit the following passage.
He listened to the loud noise from the hillside. It occurrs to him that they were
in the battle field. Once he has supposed that fight with the enemy country
would be a thrilling experience. He gaze around him and was astonished to
see the dust and smoke rising like a cloud. The trench in which he hide was so
small that he could hardly breathe. Before he came out of it, all his friends
went to their camps.
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